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FURIOSO:good battle,nice rhyming words with battle,cause nothing really rhymes with that anymore and all the words have been used already.good structure,i like the way you made the words that were supposed to rhyme bold.you had some real good material with shit like
ayo...
bring venom to this `battle` like snakes with `rattles`//1
you tryna flow against my current but ya boat has no `paddles`//2
this is good,real tight,nothing to say.
overall:8/10
DELEON:not bad of a battle here,pretty good structure,weak wordplay,overused topic,flow wasnt bad,um,not that great of a comeback after a real good verse by furioso.i wasnt feeling some of your lines
I spit shit so hard it cripples your spine/
gettin out of line-liable to get you encased in tha pine
the weakest one by far and need improvement.
overall:4/10
FINAL VOTE: FURIOSO
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