spul nice flow ok vocab could use a little work structure pretty good structure could try to even lines out a lil bit u came with nice personals id like 2 c more multis thouhg u had a few played lines but 4 the most part were pretty creative i liked how u used the first letters thats ill so urs is pretty advanced im gonna give u a 8.5/10
tripplen ur structure wasnt quite as good as spuls ur lines were uneven quite a bit so that could use some work u came with mad personals like spul u had ok vocab couyld use some work though u came really played like every line was played so u need to work on creativity ur verse was good but dropped off on the 2 verse ill give u a 5.5/10
kings ok verse u flow stuck in a few places but was pretty good ur structure was pretty good u came a lil played though so u need to work on creativity u came with good personals pretty good verse ive ssen better from u though ill give u a 7/10

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