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Old 05-08-04, 01:43 AM   #14
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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elooch ur strusture could use a lil help a few of ur lines were really uneven ur flow started out really nice and slowly faded off it could use some work ur creativity was ok u didnt have very good personals like the reast ur vocab was the best out of all or them but u just didnt have a very good verse i fetl ill give u a 6.5/10 ive seen better from u
so spuls team 15.5/20
tripples team 12/20 u really didnt work up 2 ur potential id like 2 c a rematch
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