Well, besides the fact that you "t"y_pE -- Li"k"e THI*S//!!1, and that you post "Respectible losses/wins, AND the score of the match...

Besides all of that, you suck at battling, now lemme break it down for you.



Im bout to test ur “Murderous Methods” nobility//--1
And at the same time prove my deadly versatility//--2
self glorification. No punch. Anyone can say, "Its the new fad//Im bad//" Also, it had no metaphore, no cliche, no wordplay, AND was ended with "//'s" at the end...
Im an intelligent vigilant that no one can suppress//--3
But for you it aint the same, how can a “mask be Murderous”//--4
Ok, first off, Murderous and suppress dont rhyme...You attempted a punch but failed horribly. Also, you try and make things stand out. People aren't stupid, or its just so rediciously far-fetched from the battle, that it makes no sence.
How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
Again with the quotations...another weak attempt at a punch. You show no complexity at ALL. None, nothing.
Ur verse is like “love letters” coz all they do is “miss me”//--7
Dis battle is “uneven” like the eyes of “Shannon Doherty”//--8<<ScareTactics
Dont explain things...
You couldn’t be “hot even if you were Satans right-hand-devil//--9
Even then you would be “too far south” to be anywhere near my level//--10
Not a punch, another self glorification line.
You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12
Ok, your using quotaions on words, but they don't relate to anything, not even the other quoted words...
im rippen this pussy, leavin him wet wit some diseases//--13
after this battle he will be banished like the jews did jesus//--14
...your only attempt at a punch that skidded a hair on his right sideburn. Very weak and uncreative. Played played played...
listen kid, im not ur average vet, im invunerable against ur "D/R tactics"//--15
you couldnt drop shit if you were taking hits of "profolactics"//--16<<E-lax
no...

So, You have no metas, no cliches, no wordplay, and no personals. Not to mention no punches. So that leaves you with what? No structure because you had lines and quotes everywhere...my eyes hurt now... You had a few mis-placed multies and they actualy made it worse...so you dont get that. You have nothing.


You have been sonned!

Good day.