my raps are da be-all and end-all(best)//
rip off yo legs make ya unable to crawl//
im so intimidating i can make da realest gangstas bawl//
you one o' dem wanabees added to ma merk list//
you really dont scare me shakin yo skiiny lil fist//

^^^^ decent flow/rhyming...it's comin off a tad too simple for me
punches are landing, just not that hard


your scared to face me-your weak watch tha plot unfold//
i'll have you running from tha "NET" with your hands up like soccer goals//
you spittin like one of them herb bitches new to tha site//
I could give you an uppercut an a jab- but i'll just give you a right//


^^^^ more complex...good punches/wordplay


Vote: Deleon...more complex verse..better wordplay


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