Originally Posted by KiNg SoLo

Jay-dogg Ain't Shit
If I Lose?, Ya Know Da Yard I Come Out Reincarnated
2...wtf??? where's the rhyme???
I Could Corner Him In Da Streetz
Beat Em Up A Little Cauze You Know He Ain't Shit To Me
2...again, where's the rhyme???
When You Fuck With Me Prepare For Retaliation
And I Be Doin It All Da Time Without Any Hesitation
4...basic wack shit!! Imrpove kid!!
Your Rhymes Be Bitin
Where I'm From You Gotta Be Disciplined
2...i shud really be givin u jack for these no rhyme bullshit lines!!
You Flyweight And I'm Heavy
This Is U.s. Not Scotland And I'ma Take Ya Lady
4...another wack line!! Make ure words rhyme dog, then after u master that we'll get down to serious elevatin!!


so we got Da Infamous standin wearin his dress/
after i pound his face, gonna be a terrable mess/
5...pretty basic, not really a punch!!
and whats up with that rap u spittin son/
ive seen better shit done by a hit n run/
4...bleh! u not doin that well either dog.
i thought i had a challange on my hands/
but this bitch is as good as 1 of those boy bands/
5...basic again, not gud really!!
better watch before he brakes into song n dance/
just like one of those gay ass frogs from france/
8...just for dissin france...lmfao...i hate those french lazy bastards!!
i bet you are a heavy weight, bet yo' ass weighs over 600lb's/
ass so big we could swear its perfectly round/
6...aight punch, no real power.
you gonna be the next bitch buried in the doggpound/
ill bury you so deep you'll never be found/
as soon as this is done youll be 6ft underground/
6...basic again! u need to elevate ure shit man!! beef up da personals, get sum multis, use creativity...that sort of shit ya know!!

POINTS BREAKDOWN
infamous - 14/50 (28%)
jay_dogg - 43/60 (71%)

V/- Jay_Dogg (OBVIOUSLY)