breakdown:

jay dogg:

im so fucked up in the head you scream when i drop/
deleon the guy in the corner with the pink top/
^^ok opener good punch 7/10
This homo thinks he is a true thug/
dude stop playin with your mamas rug/
^^bad bar 3/10
enough said there homeboy/
playin with your bitches sex toy/
^^another bad bar no hard punch 3/10
so now that im done killin dis kat/
gonna start bitin like a vampire bat/
^^ok metaphor 6/10
we can start with the lyrical destruktion/
crew is goin down startin off with deleon/
^^just because they both end in "on" doesnt mean they rhyme 2/10
dark knights startin the revolution/
get ready for some new age sound pollution/
^^gay closer 3/10

overall: 24/60

DeLeon:

Like "trip'n fat bitches on hills" --my lines ill leave ya "roll'n"//
And tha only reason dudes think ya -tightz- cuase ya "cuntz deasesed and swoll'n"//
^^good first line 2nd line stretched good punch 6/10
this kid's a joke- fillin me with laughter//
you couldnt mold a "HOT" verse-even if it was encased in plaster//
^^good punch 2nd line stretched again 5/10
I dont need a blade- my ryhmes leave ya scarred//
Chokin on dick tha only time you have the right to spit hard//
^^2nd line is played but good flow 6/10
you cant compare Lyrical D and tha dark knights/
cuz even i merked your leader-not even that hard of a fight//
^^ok punch 5/10
from scotland huh- so you wearin one of them skirts//
you probably one of them fools that lived through abortion-to birth//
^^good closer best bar of battle 8/10

overall: 30/50

vote: DeLeon...overall his verse hit alot harder with better punches wordplay and structure...jay you really need to elevate your punches were bad structure was off only good bar was your opener pretty much...besides that u need to elevate

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