spul: okay you had a well structured verse. Flow was pretty fair. vocabulary was okay...But your punches werent that hard hitting....mainly because most of your verse contained fillers. you brought creativity with that spelling at the margin sh.t...but now that is getting played. what you need to work on is combining personal punches now that is a deadly combination. and multies and sh.t like that.

Creativity: you had a good structure also. flow was a little better then spuls. vocabulary a little better too. Your punches were okay..but ive seen better. this was close but due to your lack of bars you put down...but lyrically you got it.......I don't think these people know how to vote...or they just dont understand a verse....peace

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