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Old 05-08-04, 02:57 PM   #30
Willa
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ok spul r structure could use work in spots creative ur structure was good a ll around
spul ur flow was good creative urs was good but stuck in 1 place ood vocab from both um punches spul u had better punches especially how u did the thing down the side u did like double punches lol creative urs hit hard 2 but not quite as hard good battle id like 2 c more creativeness from both though
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