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Old 05-08-04, 03:25 PM   #42
Shadows edge
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Ok check it.. a couple of problems first. Hindu doesnt meant pray to mecca, that would be islam. anyway....

y'all both had good concepts but failed to bring them to fruition. michalangelo and class sic was nice, but the next line ruined the punch. and that stretched line personal would have been a lot better if it was actually a good punch. however, you had the islam lines that were still really funny, and that closer was pretty nice... SPUL your stuff was played.. even your personals were all shit ive seen before (can't spell, not tough, yeah yeah, seen it). i give this to creativitie because his verse seemed fresh.. and frankly i wasnt feeling that spelling name down the side ish.
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