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Old 05-08-04, 04:18 PM   #24
E Looch
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qp your opener was pretty sick nice wordplay and good punch i liked that shit closer wasnt fealin it to much to stretched out an killed the punch even tough it wasnt much of one and the rest of your verse was pretty sick though hardly any filler lines stayed consistant with good solid punchs and personals verse had good wordplay in areas i was fealin that shit tight verse

kb your opener didnt make since wahts blueprint got to do with dylon? set up line was nice pretty creative but i didnt see a punch and your closer didnt feal it either had good wordplay again an everything but again i didnt see no good punch and the rest of your verse was pretty much the same to me the where only like 2 good punchs that i seen the rest was creative and nicely worded but not that many solid punchs or personals the dog and deadly virus was your best line to me but basically it didnt feal this verse at all brah

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