Okay,both of you were far too simple.I can underatand why though,casue you both newbs.But next time,add some complexity to ur verse.Flow was better by Beatmasta , although it wasn't good as well.Keep lines around the same # of sllyables.Neither of you were complex,but beatmasta's lines seemed to have more time put in it.Neither of you got creative as well.But at least Beats had a mutli is his first verse(why do you have 2??).Fearlez, you need serious work.Ur punches,flow,everthing was lacking.

Vote-Beatmasta K