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Old 05-08-04, 10:16 PM   #6
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ghost took this battle wordplay and punches were sick opener was hott and closer was straight...structure was ok nothing really to it flow was good...overall good verse

best bar:have u tookin out the game just like james worthy
send shotz threw ya jersey that make u melt like a hershey

worst barr get left wraped in a rug an stuffed in the trunk of a skylark
u got riped apart like u waz covered in blood an fed to a shark

lil chucky i wasnt feelin ya verse your structure is different but i aint gonna hate on that but it wasnt as consistent as ghost's verse...u had some ok punches and decent wordplay and u got potential if u work on it....

best bar:This is my best, so i'll stop an lay to rest, cuz ya best put on a bullet-proof-vest. <<and that wasnt even a good bar but it was your best one

worst bar's:the whole entire rhyme elevate

vote:ghost354 overall he had a hotter verse and i felt it more than lil's verse
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