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Old 05-08-04, 11:04 PM   #12
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OPTIKS: not bad of a verse,good flow,punches were decent,structure was pretty good,um nothing else to say.
best line:This Nigga drop NIGHTMARES about Chokin on CASHEWS...yeah he always DREAMS NUTS//*think*
Put all ya THROWBACKS on ya CEILIN cause for u to win u gonna have to TEAM-UP
this is a pretty good line,good thing you put thing after it or i wouldntave got it.
worst line:I came wit the Blood Bath Greetin//
everybody Body say GRACE I'm about to Start EATIN//
this line is very bad.that was the worst lin there.

overal:6/10.work on some of your lines

DA INFAMOUS:a very horrible verse.OK structure,you coulvde added punch,um disses werent that great.
best line:none
worst line:everything.
overall:3/10.work hard

VOTE:OPTIKS

RETURN DA FAV AGAINST DELEON
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