breakdown for counTREE jay:
flow:i liked it no off spots good all the way through 7/10
volcab:solid use worked well with your verse above average by far 7/10
story:it was a real hard topic but i thought you did well with it good job 6/10
overall:20/30 well rounded verse good work
breakdown for flow intelligent:
flow:not quite on the same level as counTREE just seemed alittle basic 6/10
volcab

retty basic array not bad though 6/10
story:you did well in working with this topic too liked both of your stories equal 7/10
overall:19/30
vote--close battle it was a hard topic but both did alright with it my vote is for counTREE even with his short verse it was just on with the flow and volcab