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Old 05-08-04, 11:23 PM   #13
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for counTREE jay:

flow:i liked it no off spots good all the way through 7/10

volcab:solid use worked well with your verse above average by far 7/10

story:it was a real hard topic but i thought you did well with it good job 6/10

overall:20/30 well rounded verse good work

breakdown for flow intelligent:

flow:not quite on the same level as counTREE just seemed alittle basic 6/10

volcabretty basic array not bad though 6/10

story:you did well in working with this topic too liked both of your stories equal 7/10

overall:19/30

vote--close battle it was a hard topic but both did alright with it my vote is for counTREE even with his short verse it was just on with the flow and volcab
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