breakdown for shadow's edge:
flow:good job no down spots in my eyes 7/10
volcab
retty good i've seen better but it works well with this verse 7/10
punches:some alright lines nothing too hard best," leave you so lazy… that even your heart is dead-beat" good job 7/10
overall:21/30
breakdown for L.I.:
flow:straight forward and nothing else i can say good job 7/10
volcab:solid use nothing bad here i think this is some of the best i've seen from you 7/10
punches:lots of real personal lines nothing too new but you stayed on him through the whole piece good job 8/10
overall:22/30
vote--i think in the end of it L.I. edged it out for the win good personals