im smackin this ghost whore with raps from a deep gorge//
ADFSGHJ is what youll see cause i'll slam ya head on the keyboard//

^^ nice...but I've seen something similar before

you must be chewin on "PIGS" cause ya rhymes is "BOAR"//(BORE)*
my names absurd ill "pull ya fuckin veins thru ya skin" you herb//

^^^ clever...but I used a "boar" line similar in 2002...not bad tho

rhymes will rip you in short..so you better wear a lyrical vest//
ghost the best? thats all "thought and no action" "like cyber-sex"//

^^ that was hot
keystylin is what im about be smart u dont wanna test one//
shyt!! i could "marry your mother" and u still couldnt "step-son"//

^^^ nice closer...but again, seems familiar


Not sayin you BIT anything dawg, jus saying some of those lines are just new spins on old ideas...well done/clever


7.5/10

From: TX
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might az well write ya linez wit careless regret
whipe ya ass wit a k mart jersey you just puttin shit on the net
if ya flow gets intelligent as the world turnz then wheres the skill?
seems like the earthz rotation must be on fuckin standstill


^^ not feelin the flow or the punches

blah

my style consistz of fabricz made By mattin wool no wonder im felt
you writin datez n timez on ya jock to get some whenz under ya belt

^^ NO...not feelin it

6.5/10

elevate your punches dawg...vocab was horrible...its not that you didn't use BIG words, they just sucked. (weren't descriptive enough)


Vote: Flow