this was a decent battle...beatmasta i think you would do better in audio than text your verse was more of a spoken piece u had to like say it out loud to make it sound better so i think in audio that could have worked but in text that lacked in alot of areas...u had no punches and u had alot of filler you talked more about yourself than your opponent and your structure was a lil off flow was ok but if u wanna be a text head u need to elevate alot...deleon quick is right from what i have seen from you...you got potential to beat some other cats on this board...this verse was sick...good punches nice metaphor in the AIDS...HIV lin...good flow and decent structure...closer wasnt too hott but stilla nice piece

vote: deleon he stayed consistent throughout his verse and it was all around better in all areas

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