The Epitome Of Greatness
From: NY ... Born And Raised |
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IP:
breakdown:
beatmasta:
yeah u musta been hot when you first came out
came to pee in your parade and put ure fuckin camp fire out
^^ok opener 3/10
you better stop runnin your mouth, or ill come to your house,
pull a 44 magnum out, and blow your mutha fuckin brains out
^^not feelin it the whole "gangsta rap" is out if u didnt notice 2/10
a knock niggaz like you out in couples
not cause i can box either, cause i was born with 7 knocks in each knuckles
^^weak bar 2nd line stretched 1/10
pass me the rat poison here killah smoke that
then ama hit you in the head with a crack pipe and make ure lungs collapse
^^one of your better bars 5/10
if ure a dawg ama wolf and i will attack
and eat your frail ass up like a snack ure no match
^^getting better 6/10
when it comes to decent rap thier was only one author
hes jsut barkin cause he just found out am his father
^^ummm ok 1st line good 2nd line bad 5/10
ill rob the dumb old fucker and tell him nigga to follow
give it up killah the points in my bullets are hollow
am gonna reconstruct ure face with a 40 bottle
^^another OK punch 4/10
i told your mum to get an abortion she wouldnt listen
she kept suckin dickin and smokin crack in the kitchen
^^suckin dickin....??ooook umm still a decent bar 6/10
overall: 32/80
lyrical killah:
Beat write your shit, perfect it, if you need to, rehearse it.../
Yeah, you're not wack! Only thing that's not ill is your verses!.../
^^lol good opener 7/10
Forget a battle, he couldn't swing a punch in a playground.../
And your audio hooks - You couldn't feel then with surround sound.../
^^ok punch 5/10
Sonning this geek, your words are cheaper than your beats.../
If you had a dollar for each win, you'd STILL be living on the streets.../
^^lol good shyt 7/10
Beat your verse is predictible - brag, brag, brag and some filler.../
Put it this way - You couldn't flow well If you lived in a river.../
^^2nd line a lil played but still good 6/10
Old timer, a veteran with words and disses all fucked and mushy.../
Beat even stuck his dick in Bagpuss so he could say he got some pussy!.../
^^hmm ok no comment ok bar 5/10
Either way your gay, I hope your happy with this roastin'.../
If I were you - Id hire a ghostwriter so you can like the shit your postin'.../
^^lil played 4/10
Beat end of the road, a victim of Sick Scriptures left bloody and killed.../
Vet status...pah...you'd be better off admiting your unskilled.../
^^decent closer 6/10
overall: 40/70
vote: lyrical overall his verse was hotter he had some dope punches and consistency which were the highlights of this battle elevate beatmasta
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