not bad.better than most the bullshit i read on this site, i think its nice, im a spoken word \fan and thit looks like it could be done both ways..i can pic the flow up pretty well in this, its juss gotta be said a little slower than normal on a mellow beat....juss cant do it fast and it should be juss fine.....

8/10 , work on the wordage juss a little, you had nice vocab, but sum the ways it was worded wasnt good

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