View Single Post
Old 05-09-04, 12:49 AM   #31
accomplishment
"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
 
accomplishment's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,107
From: Da Nasty North
IP:

ok

infamous....

nice verse but your punches didnt come that strong your flow was aight and struc was good just gotta get punches harder and htere and make em more personal

you a girl so watchu doin messin wit a man/
so stay back before ya face gets a tatoo of da back of my hand/
^^
opener your best line

marvelous

good verse also flow kinda off cuz of da stretched structur but your punches made up for all the mistakes made there

because marv came wit so much more creativity he wins this one
__________________
Send a message via MSN to accomplishment