http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122401
^^^ vote


Okay,GKillaz had the better flow in this shit,I reallt don't like the perfect square structure,but ur verse still flowed.General,you need to get more personals and better rhyme shceme.Ur verse just didn't flow well either.Try to keep it the same # of sllyables for each line.U weren't that bad,just keep working and then challenge GKillaz again.

Vote-GKillaz

Both of you hit up a vote in my battle