gkillaz-Alrigh punches.....Definitly came harder...
PLus your structure was better....Keep up
with the similies and metephores....I liked the
complexity.......ALso very understandable
Work on punches a lil more and keep elevatin....

Hood-No....all you talked about is what you are
goin to do....Hit punches on him....Few weak punches
none was hard.....Structure was alright....Keep up
with the similies and metaphores....Work on complexity
and vocab.....Keep everything decent and keep
elevatin
v/gkillaz