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Old 05-09-04, 12:01 PM   #8
Metaskriptz
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aight nice
Flows-You had a few hard punches....Some wack weak
I likes the similies and the metaphores...ALso the vocab
Structure was good and decent....Nice complexity
Good elevation I liked some thing...Work on punches
and keep elevatin

Killah-Work on punches....FLows came a slight better.
you stuff was aight to dont get me wrong....I liked the
vocab also the structure....WOrk on similes....But the
comlexty is stuff is nice to.....Work on punches and
ya will be aight.....Keep elevatin
v/Flows
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