Jay Dogg-U still didn't get there yet.Ur verse was too simple.Try to add wordplay and imagery to it.Flow was god,but punches were horrible.

Best line-no hating,but you had nutin

Worst-all
I hate to do that,but I got to be honest Jay.U need work.

Deleon-too many stretched lines.Jay dogg had tha better flow.Ur punches were OK though.

Best line-from scotland huh- so you wearin one of them skirts//
you probably one of them fools that lived through abortion-to birth//

Worst line-this kid's a joke- fillin me with laughter//
you couldnt mold a "HOT" verse-even if it was encased in plaster//

VOTE-DELEON
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