Optimal-good flow,except for opener where u had a line with 3 words.Ur punches were OK.
Best line-I’ma rape this generic emcee..leave him retiring like quick like jayz..//
I got this nigga feelin punk’d like I’m ashton krutcher on mtv..//
Worst line-This cat gets no love..i no theres building tension...//
..not to mention//


Raw Talent-Too many stretched lines,flow was off,punches were too simple.
Best line-Havin big pun as ya rappa, shit, outcome the same for you...//
Fuckin too many calories of wackness, get on the treadmill dude...//
Worst Line-everthing else

Overall-This was sorta one-sided.Optimal had this easily.Raw,you need work in every catergory.
Vote-Optimal
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