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Old 05-09-04, 05:41 PM   #10
K-Trin
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Sac King-Had some stretched lines in there.I wasn't feeling punches.All-in-All,ur verse was somewhat boring.
Best Line-i murder you with my lyrical and verbals killings
commin out like a pistol instead of lead shillings
Worst line-too much to choose

Whitey-I liked ur verse way better.Nice wordplay,flow,and punches.
Best line-Got you 'BOOKED' like an old library book, and that is true/
Once you read this shit, you gon get 'SHOOKED' like a bumpy ass car ride/
Worst Line-I got all yo bitches bustin my balls wit they tounges and still i fucked and shanked her/
Makin you all pissed cuz i gave yo girlfriend a taste, twist and twirl/


Overall-Both of you were complex and creative.But Whitey's verse seemed better.Sac,next time try to add wordplay and imagery.

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