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Old 05-09-04, 06:37 PM   #18
E Looch
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break doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooown

gkilla um that opener was pretty stupid maybe reword it and use it against him but um it was a self glorifcation line an it aint work to well an ya closer wasnt fealin it either again not well worded and ja rule aint sorry just to let you know wo no points there either but the rest of your verse was pretty good the middle stayed pretty consistent wit good punchs and personals had a good flow to it to nice drop overall

raw talent or who ever you are under that alias your opener was nice decent punchs and all and the closer was decent tried a personal didnt fully connect to me but the rest of your verse was average a few personals and punchs didnt really see any that stood out to me just average punchs that stayed consistent ya verse just lacked creativitie and strong punchs not bad though

vote gkillaz
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