Its Like Doctors After A Bad case of Amnesia...Leave Merk needing New-Practice/
Merk trying to aproaches with Swrewd-Tactics/
Like 'Failing Martial Artists'...No way this Foo-Passes!!(Fool...Foo as in Kung Fu)/
Cuz I got Heat That 'Seperates The Boys From The Gurls' Like Elementary 'School-Dances'!!!..*(ha)//
After this battle ima be like 'Tramps at the Dump'...Ima Stick-to-recks/
Your like Bad water polo Games, You dont get nuttin wit ya Flow In-The-Net/
Real Slit-ya-neck N take the 'Title Out Ya Sig' Like Fuckin 'Conterfit Cigarettes'!!//
Like Massive Flinestone Fans, I’ll Crash ya Walls Till you Got Nuttin but 'Rubble-To-See/
Like 'Rasicm in Classes'...i hope its not 'Trouble,-You-Seek!!..(HA...Think)/
Real Leave this fuck-in-defeat, not knowin nuthin-bout-heat/
Last time i noticed W-C-W...They were shut down by W-W-E!!!!(OMG)**//
Real put more hate to U.S.A(You Essa) Than Saddam Housain after Bombing-In-Iraq/
Every punch you droppin-isa-wack/
Take ya seat and vomit-ina-bag, ill leave ya Body-ina-cast/
Diss take a torch to The champ, this like Pakistani Prayers!! Cuz im leavin 'Omin-On-the-Mat'!!(Amen)..//
^^^ok opener, terrible closer bad structure, ok punches
real thourough overaall *7* you need to eleavte more and work on the structure
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How the hell u suppose to feed doin a blind spit?/ (he said no feedin)
U could be 'Thoroughly bred' and still couldnt be 'my bitch'/ (his name is Real Thorough)
Welcome to Merk incorporated and ur the first victim/
Ur rhymes couldnt be 'sick' if u actually 'licked em'/
Dogg yo rap up there look like some pre written shit/
But on the other hand the rap looks a lil pre bitten. bitch/
Haha you really thought i was a n00b and this was an ez battle/
but im bout to bust ya bladder, and penalize u wit a paddle/
I dun see how u made it into lyrical destruction/
when my flow got u under abduction, but im still under construction/
like broken bones ill leave u dead wit a concussion/
dis wasnt a battle, it was merely a poetry discussion/
the way u rap, i thought u was actually 'enchanting'/
The only way u could 'top' me is wit rap 'enhancements'/
Ur style is outplayed, and ur punches cant 'connect'/
put ur rhymes in front of a mirror, and they still wouldnt 'reflect'/
^^ nice opener ok closer, good punches great flow ok sytrcuture
keep elevatin though aight?nice job i was feelin merks verse more
so my vote / merk inc.

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