he bite an still didnt have any tight lines they was all stretched out no kinda punchs closer didnt even come close to rhymin and you should start tain useless shit out ya lines tha you dont need to make ya punchs hit harder and get creative and try usin wordplay son i aint even holdin bitin against you shit jay z bites so aint shit but seriusoly take my advice cause that verse wasnt even close to average and g killas ummm decent verse
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think this is one of those things where you understand what your saying, but other people dont
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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote
some people that are mods on here
