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Old 05-09-04, 11:53 PM   #9
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yo ok...

ks... umm

ok your verse was good but you kept up with flow but you contradicted yourself... said his rhymes where gay... then said they where refreshing i dont really know what you were meanin by that just work on that kinda shit...

lyrical killah...
ok good punches and flow but work on da structure its like one long line one short if its like that it makes it hard to flow...but ur punches cam at an araye of people you need to personalize your shit make this kid feel whatchu bringen ....

ok k.s. 6/10

ok killah 7/10

close but killah gets my vote
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