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lyrical kid your opener was confusing i aint really catch it didnt make much since to me since i didnt understand maybe the wording was fucked our some shit and your closer was decent pretty creative an wrodplay was good the rest of ya verse had good punchs but didnt really have much else in it creativite was there in spots and so was absically everything else

trini your opener was nothin no real punch to me work on openin battles better and your closer was simple and the wording was messed up in it makes it hard to understand an dont know why the jay z was in there it didnt make since an the rest of your verse was ddecent had a few good punchs in it but not really consistent with hard punchs and lacked abunch of creativitie in your whole verse just elevate

vote lyrical

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