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Old 05-10-04, 08:49 AM   #5
onetwo
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nice wordplay, just repetitive as hell. some words just seemed like you threw them into it because this is text. like this shit. i'll bold what i'm talking about.

cause i'm so hot i go off like bombs set off by arabics/ sporadic when i spit fantastic when i ripped it/

arabics and sporadic don't rhyme the way everything else does. it's just thrown in there. otherwise, for such a short flow, it's nice.
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