hmmm. how did you count your bars off? 16 bars= 32 lines. that's how i was taught. but whatever. this was not that good honestly. who were you dissing? why? with those questions unanswered, this really didn't make too much sense. the multis were pretty weak, and there was very little variety. you rhymed faggits twice in one bar, you rhymed nigga twice in one bar. this had to be a keystyle. work on your vocab and your multis if your gonna use them in everything.