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Old 05-10-04, 01:42 PM   #5
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ima gonna hurt you with some lethal dose of my poetic devices//
its acidic, it'l melt ya mouth from the spit i inflict on your pathetic disguises//

^^^ lots of vocab and rhymin..but it ain't hittin him hard

quit barkin 'dawg', you'll embarass this thrd with ya 'joints of shame'//
i wouldnt be surprise if ya mom disowned you cuz of ya 'pointless name'//


^^ nice rhyming..but your trying to dazzle your opponent, not knock him out...sup wit dat?

U must be crazy askin to battle im like movin targets
i got punches to levetate ya just like magic carpets


^^^ good opener..w/nice imagery

just proves u shouldn t be here..... should be taken his own life
not worth the drop of seamon .....waisted on em that one nite

^^ decent closer


Vote: Tony...punches actually landed


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