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Old 05-10-04, 02:28 PM   #5
JSmoove
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Posts: 87
From: Texas
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Kryo, nice flow...I especially like the verse "but the world's not against you.............
....................except when I smash the ground with your face"

K-ROC, you got nice ideas, but it's organization you lack. Focus on the specifics and grill your opponent on them rather than jumping around with no explanation. For instance, what is your intended connection with these two verses..."Lyrical Hercules, Goddess Born and Goddess-Sent//
Print My Verse, Put It In Ya Pocket And “Save Yourself The Embarassment”//"