ny...

ok opener that was retarted.. rare as a guy named shelf... are you joking... ok anyways you gotta work on flow throw in multis make your shit flow and stop witht he corny ass punches and kinda do some research on who your battle look on profile see what there name is... do anything you can to get some mad personalas in there cuz thats what kills people... i mean i would quote a line but i couldnt find one good enough to quote the best line up there is the one in ur sig... anyways elevate...

ram...

ok you one this verse inyour opener and it wasnt even that good..

NY state of mind wouldn't survive if I gave him 10 guns and shot everyone in my set for him,
Like Winston smokes that's no bull or maybe New York'll pay his debt for him,
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^^ aight i like that line kinda made me laugh just try not to rhyme him with him but it end up workin for you... your whole verse where punches aimed at him so you clearly one this in every aspect plus you got mad flow...

vote ram

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