wow ok i battled both of you newbs aight... so here is my decision

ny state of mine.. you gotta rap shit that makes sense and with less filler like the cornflakes box lines couldnt been better...

try like this...

pussy bitch runnin as i pop deese shots....
seen less of a chicken on da corn flakes box.../

coulda made that line ill...
you feelin me...

ok..

d bate.. ok verse bur you still lack complexity... like rhymen with pimp with limp that isnt allowed but you still came with one punch i think ...

ok ny came with mmore complexity yet his shit was fucked up in places so he gets my vote

ny

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