*applause* you had this shit going from teh beginning. you kinda lost drive near teh ending bar but you still killed it. nice drop. wordplay and vocab was nice, minimal but effective. punches were there and all clean, you could be a great battler. meta's were nice, you had alot of them but they meshed well. multi's were dope, it's like you were meant for them shits. seriously, this is a wonderful drop and i want to see more from you like this.