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Old 05-10-04, 04:11 PM   #9
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supreme, you can try pinchin urself but u cant wake up from this dream,
i attract, my rhymes pull u in like a lyrical tractor beam,
^Not To Bad Of An Opener' Just Need To Come Harder With Your Punches!!' .. I Didnt Really See A Punch In There ..So 4/10

all u wack mc's are more edidble than it may seem,
slice u up and eat u like a pizza hut grand pan 'supreme'
^ "All" Meaning? .. Not A Direct Punch! ..! Aint Even Directed AT $$UPREME At All' .. 2/10 Bad Closer!

Checckity Checck Checck:

Luminaz Is So Stupid He Brought In "tennis Literature" When He Had An "open Book" Test In Class~
And Called Up "visa" When His School Told Him He Didn't Have Enough "credits" To Pass~
^Was A Safe Opener' ...!!! 8/10 ..

Listen & Learn, Ya Rhymes Look Funny, Like 2pac With-a-perm~
Ya Lyrics Need 2 Be Returned, Cuz They're 'defective' Like Rotten-sperm~
^Nice Punchline 8/10

my Ammo Is Like 'the Shower' How Your 'wig Get Sprayed'~
Making Debri-of-brains,sick!, I'm 'nuttin-in-ya-face' 2 Make You Watch-my-kids-behave~
^Nice Closer 9/10 ... $$ Takes The Vote With Eeeeeeze' ..

Vote: $$UPREME
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