Decent drops from both sides.

NY State of Mind:
You're flow wasn't bad, and you had a few clever lines, but you suffered in the punches category. For the most part, they weren't directed at R.A.M., and they could have been more clever.

Best Line:
"I'll Erase Your Computer's R.A.M. With These Lyrickz"
(Since it was actually directed at R.A.M.)

Worse Line:
"Who Are You?, You're Az Rare Az Da Name Shelp"
(Rather on the cheesy side)

R.A.M.:
An all around strong drop with good flow and clever, focused punches. My only little quibble with it, and this is nitpicking, is that at 22 lines to NYSoM's 10, your verse sounded like it had some filler that could've been cut out.

Best Line:
"Listen homeboy I came to change your state of mind and place it on the state of mine"

Worse line:
"Your rhymes crashed in da begining now they just veget-ables"
(I'm not sure I get it. :P )

Verdict: R.A.M.

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The question I wonder is after death, after my last breath
When will I finally get to rest" - Tupac Amaru Shakur, "Me Against The World"