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Old 05-10-04, 04:35 PM   #8
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good verse i just dont see how you could possibley be original top ten... your verse was good but you just had stupid filler like on the windo sill that is pointless just so you can get a rhyme off your struc is good and flow but your punches were nothin ....

mic

good versse good punches liked the prom suite line you just need to work on the stretched bars and you could be illar than most cats here...

vote mic...

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