breakdown:

eric89:

yo i battle newb bitchs like u all tha time
they cant even rhyme. its like a fuckin crime
^^good wordplay bad punch 6/10
i mean how can u be so bad at spittin
not like ur spittin cuz ur shits probably bittin
^^more good wordplay bittin line is played 4/10
my verses hit u like a womens smack across the face
kinda like when u hit on a girl and she pulls out the mace
^^ok punch 5/10
whys ur name flows when u know's ya flows dont flow
y u try battlin a veteren who'll kick ya ass right out the doo
^^first line was good 2nd made it bad 3/10
two mo lines let me try to finish this
u spit ur bittin shit while i be givin ur mom a lil kiss
^^you talked too much about bitin weak finisher 2/10

overall: 20/50 (40%)

.flows.:

Nigga ill put you on the muder inc. Roster like if ya was ja rule..//
Wit ya ludacris signature you like him and ya actin a fool..//
^^ok punch in first line good personal in 2nd 7/10
Your record is wack and and ya bitch is about to get worked..//
So call strobe cause ya bound to get murked..//
^^ good punch 6/10
I spit faster then you think..your probably like 3 years old and ya name is benny..//
B/c with that wack as avatar ill make the bitch magicly move and say oh my god they killed kenny...//
^^bad first line...good personal in 2nd line 5/10
This nigga eric is already on a losin streak..Bitch wake up to reality..//
B/c my rhymes is so ill my punch lines will rip ya head off like a mortal kombat fitality
^^first line good mortal kombat fatality line is played 4/10
You wack ass nigga b/c what you have on me?? NOTHIN...//
So the next time you battle me...Bitch think b4 you hit that submitt button..//
^^ok closer 2nd line is played too 5/10

overall: 27/50 (54%)

vote:.flows....both of you had okay verses but .flows. you almost lost with all them played lines use something orijinal it will hit alot harder..eric your rhyme scheme is pretty basic nothing that would get you a win...played punch no personals good wordplay if u eleveta you will have alot of potential

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