breakdown:

strinibonafide:

On the touch of moisture, the mic vibrates as I plunder/
I come and steal yo thunder like a caribbean pirate/
^^i think u needed to switch the 2nd line bad punch 3/10
the fact that u 17 years old and still lost in mushroom kingdom/
forces me to stomp on ya head to make room for some mo wisdom/
^^good personal OK punch 7/10
Aight...
u got a thinner chance of winning than Calista on SLIM FAST/
u waitin on fat lady's song to lose but like Beyonce she SINGS FAST/
^^first line good 2nd line average 6/10
even on paper this slaughter is fatal...I put yuh flag down to HALF MAST/
throw punches with everlast gloves but in this battle you'll N-EVERLAST/
^^good punch 6/10
Suffice to be sacrificed like the virgin u are...youth/
u 'die easy' like a polar opposite to Bruce/ (Bruce Willis-die hard)
^^good punch and meta 7/10
and even though..
u try hard... like Israel and Palestine at truce/
its bye bye Koopa...game over for you/
^^average punch bad closer 3/10

overall: 32/60 (53%)

koopa troppa:

kid you came wit your best but ill simply just deflect it//
you regret it…found out the hard way im locally respected//
^^hott opener because of multies and wordplay 8/10
you dieing hard like “Bruce” cuz your style is “WILL LESS”//
even if ya spit "brail" these kids still couldn’t be "feelin" ya rhymes to the fullest//
^^good punch 6/10
you couldn’t bring "shit" even if ya "hopped da border"//
only to be sent back to ya "corner" by "court order"//
^^not good 4/10
What was ya thinking goin against "kingz" like me//
i may be but a sigg maker but you still battle like a St8 weak femcee//
^^stretched line 5/10
So take my advice don’t fuck wit the members of BluePrint//
You could never "Spark-Some-Flows" even if a gave ya "paper" and 2 "Flints"//
^^good closer nice meta 7/10

overall: 30/50 (60%)


vote: koopa troopa...i think his punches wee harder than strini's and he had a better flow to it...strini almost had this if he would have used stronger punches

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