just a bit of constructive crit..Try to rhyme off of a few more words than just your last one...some would consider this an A B rhyme.... and put a little more flow in it. get some sway to ya words..instead of just duh duh duh dot// duh duh duh dot// ya feel me, props for just puttin it out there, Drop another and I'll be here

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