yo both came hard on this but ya'll both need some vocab, that was some simple shit and 1,2 your stucture made your shit not even rhyme, good intensity both but ya'll need to get better. mad dog's punches made actually made some sence and could go along with it, other cat u aint got any flow wit the way u structuring it.
vote-maddog

oh and ya'll need some wordplay.

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