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Old 05-10-04, 10:18 PM   #12
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Eric 89
weak verse, but you still did enough to come out on top in this battle..
Murdah your structure sucked
set up your verse like this

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the way you had it made it hard to read and follow with a decent flow to it
Eric also had better punches..
so v/eric
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121587
hit that up
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