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Old 05-10-04, 11:35 PM   #10
e.coli
Can u beat me?..Hell No
 
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From: Da X
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this was a nice battle

supreme-fix your structure dont space your bars and get rid of the ~'s they are for newbs......u have some potential i liked some of your punches they were witty and hard hitting.......good verse

gambino-your opener was dope but u went down hill after that......u need to work on consistancy because that is why u lost this battle........make every bar as hard hitting as your opener and u will be tight.......u got out punched in this battle

v/supreme