dawgfatha, that shit was weak, generic ass verse, no good wordplay, weak opener, closer, and straight shit in between damn,
no flow worth namin, and structure was... wack, theres the word,
could tell why you wrote it could be pre written since that shit coulda been vs anyone and half the time you'd think ya were dissin his verse, even your closer was almost a pathetic attempt at a personal against his shit, BUT HE SPIT AFTER YOU

Cesus Jhist- aight your shit wasn't great but the fact it was all so very true made it funny and better, ur opener wasn't great (but true against this kid) some nice attempts at wordplay, much more vet style than the other guy, nice structure too, don't recommend feeding too much, some cats will hate for it but no one specified, overall you took it no contest

vote- Cesus Jhist