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Old 05-11-04, 01:11 AM   #15
DFrost
Flyweight
 
Posts: 157
From: NY
aight

IP:

accomplishment, you came mad weak like ya said, and ya still took it for having punches and rhyming, also took creativity and wordplay

d-bate- shit was stretched as fuck, only bar ya really coulda worked with was
"you aint Biggie, so stop Pretendin, if I aint the champ, Im bound to be Contendin'/
bitch, keep runnin, while you got them Tendons, kuz after this, your life is endin'/" it sucked but there was a little potential
ya need ta add more creativity and turn all those lines into punches